Small edits
It felt there are many repetitions, so I cut some.
I also added information about the data we have, following Alberto’s suggestion.
Also, does anyone else read it as too fluffy in wording? too much about “events” and “possibilities” seem to hinder the real prize, or core of the issue: what about the politics of an open collaborative care system? Why do they matter? I think we should insert this in the first paragraph and last…