Flyer to promote The Reef

@reeflings, team External needs your help in reviewing the copy of the visuals for a new flyer. We’d like to have your opinion. If you have 15-30’ to spare between now and Thursday evening, please start reading.

To meet our need for buyers of the larger units, team External is upgrading The Reef’s brand identity. At the start of this initiative on 8 June, we conducted a workshop. There’s a report: Login – Nextcloud.

The first result of this initiative is a revised version of the flyer. Other channels, such as thereef.brussels will follow.

This is our schedule for the coming weeks:

  • Saturday 28 June, today > submit version 2 for review to all reeflings
  • Fri 3 July > collect all the comments
  • Thu 10 July > finish a version 3
  • Thu 17 July > print

The current version 2 has at least the following known defects:

  • The Reef logo is missing
  • The illustrations are from another project of S+F.
  • Native-language speaker check not yet done

We are submitting the following documents to guide your review:

  • A document written by Angelika (role of designer), commenting on her v2 designs. At the end of this document are the links to two proposed designs that she produced. Login – Nextcloud
  • A document by Liesbet (role of copywriter) with the copy she wrote: Login – Nextcloud and Angelika integrated in her design.

To create a more or less orderly process for review. I created a document where you can leave your comments and suggestions.
https://c301.nl.tabdigital.eu/f/233450

You have until Thursday 3 July end of day to provide comments. Thank you so much!

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Hi Joannes, I couldn’t find the links to Angelika’s design - I tried Nextcloud folders and Lisebet’s document. Please assist, Thank you !

@Wenwei Fixed. The links to Liesbet’s and Angelika’s document were identical … thanks

Thank you very much @joannes to structure things a bit :slight_smile:
I made some minor comments in the document.
@Angelika : Niiice work!!

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@reeflings I’d like to bump this thread up on your long list of unread ones. If you have a moment to spare, have a read… Thank you to those who already commented.

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Hi @joannes sorry I missed the yesterday deadline.
I will have some time this evening. Still useful for a feedback for you or let’s move on? (Really not a problem if you say “it’s too late”, because I arrive after the DL :wink:)

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I also added two minor comments on the format. Sorry for the delay.

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