Hobby or empowerment?
I managed to miss this! It is actually very interesting that, when asked about your defining skills, you mention swordsmanship and singing. From the report, however, it is not completely clear that these skills help you to build your life and your future: you depict them mainly as hobbies, it seems to me.
Am I wrong? Of course there would be nothing wrong with this, but it would be quite enlightening to find out that swordsmanship is actually “good for you” is some context other than the ones you mentioned. It could well be: when I played Reality Check myself, I was forced to stray quite far from the skills typically mentioned in CVs (mine are storytelling, divination and forgiveness: if this were Dungeon and Dragons, my character would be some kind of priestly type, I guess: not as cool as your warrior-bard).